Ghost-Eyed Mediator - Reviews

Overall, the first chunk of this novel sets up a classic paranormal detective story with a modern police backdrop. The pacing is a bit uneven – some parts drag, others hook. I’m curious enough to keep reading, especially to find out what Chen Cheng’s ritual reveals. The flour and candle scene is a strong cliffhanger.

I enjoyed the back-and-forth between Zhang Qian and Chen Cheng. Their banter feels natural for a mismatched duo. Even when it’s silly, it keeps the energy up. I’d like more scenes where they actually work together instead of just bickering.

The three conditions for cooperation were mentioned but we didn’t see Captain He agree to them. That’s a small plot hole. I assume they were discussed off page, but seeing the negotiation would have strengthened the relationship.

The setting of West Capital City Park and the roller coaster – that part felt like filler. I wanted more investigation, less play. But it does show Zhang Qian’s vulnerable side when she throws up. Makes her more human.

Chen Cheng’s casual attitude is refreshing against the tense police atmosphere. He’s a foil to everyone’s seriousness. But his constant grin and jokes might wear thin. I hope he shows a darker or more focused side soon.

The side plot of Zhang Qian’s family background (high-ranking official father) feels like unnecessary backstory. It’s used to explain why she’s in criminal investigation, but it hasn’t mattered yet. Maybe it’ll pay off later if she uses connections.

The brutality of the killer is described but never shown in action. We only hear about the corpses. That’s fine for a whodunit. I appreciate that the author doesn’t wallow in gore – just enough to convey horror.

The logic of Chen Cheng cutting hair and burning incense is left unexplained. That might frustrate readers who want immediate payoff. I’m patient, but I can see how some would call it padding. The story relies on mystery, so trust the process.

The translation reads okay overall, but some phrases like “charlatan” are repeated too much. Also “in a fit of rage” and “gritted her teeth” appear several times. Could use some variety. But the rhythm of dialogue is natural enough.

He Wenhui’s role is mostly background, but his speech about reverence for natural principles is the thematic core of the story. He balances science and faith. It’s a decent philosophical point, though delivered a bit preachy.

Zhang Qian’s character arc so far is just “angry skeptic.” She hasn’t shown any growth. I hope the experience with Chen Cheng will open her mind. But right now she’s one-note. The way she hesitantly obeys after the eye incident shows she’s at least spooked.

The flour spreading scene at the end is spooky. Chen Cheng preparing the room like a ritual space, telling Zhang Qian not to make a sound. The candlelight and the white flour on the floor create a very visual, tense moment. I’m looking forward to what happens next.