The part where Tan Ci says “take me straight home” after hearing the warning is simple but powerful. He doesn’t explain himself to Yan Ming. You can tell he’s a decisive person. And later, when Yan Ming apologizes in his head, it’s funny but also shows how the world of the novel works – sometimes you have to accept that there are things beyond logic. It’s a nice character moment for both.
30. Overall I’m invested in Ronnie’s journey despite the slow start. The blend of D＆D lore chaotic humor and cosmic horror is original. The biggest weakness is the pacing especially the time skip and the lack of clear goals. But Ronnie’s personality carries the story. I’ll keep reading to see if he ever uses that salt packet or if the system gives him a better gift next time.