CharlesMartin

Overall, I’m enjoying this. It’s a fun, quick read with a unique protagonist and decent action. The worldbuilding has potential. I’ll definitely look for more if it’s available.

Jin Huamian's space-element support ability is interesting but underutilized so far. She's set up as the "weak one who needs protection", but having a space ability is incredibly valuable for logistics. The team's supplies are all stored in her space, so they're dependent on her. That gives her leverage, but the story frames her as helpless. I hope there's a twist where she reveals she's more capable than she lets on.