JeffreyThomas

The foreshadowing of Qi Sheng's eventual confrontation with the big players is good. "I once saw in ancient texts... godlike cultivators can cross star rivers." This immediately establishes the cap level of the world. He knows what is coming. The fact that he is scared of the tomb and the Forbidden Land keeps him humble and the plot grounded despite his cheats.

2 I have a suspicion that Qin Yi is playing a deeper game. He upgraded Cheng Jing's ward not out of kindness but as an incentive. If Qin Bai screws up the courtship with Shen Muyu, that upgrade is gone. It's a leash, not a gift. I hope the story explores this power dynamic more because it feels like the real villain will be the father, not the brother.