JamesMoore
1 The moment where the master says, "Child, you have already overcome the limit" is super satisfying. After all that running and suffering, you’re rooting for him. It’s a classic "training arc" payoff. The author knows how to push the emotional buttons when he wants to. It makes you forget the weird plot jumps and just enjoy the underdog story. This kind of hard-fought growth is why I keep reading these kinds of stories.
My only worry is about Su Yi. Right now, she is set up as the “logical one who gave up on him”. The “女人心变得成熟了... 权衡利弊” speech feels a bit harsh. I hope she gets more depth later, or that her reasoning isn’t just about money. Eleven years is a long time to just walk away.
The grandparents' hypocrisy is off the charts. They stole 2 million from her parents' death compensation, raised her for only four years, threw her out to work at fifteen, and now they have the nerve to act like they're doing her a favor. When the grandma said "these potatoes were specially kept for you" I literally laughed out loud. Keep them from what? Being eaten by someone else? So fake.
I appreciate that Youki’s past life as Segawa Youki isn’t just glossed over. He mentions specific things like "traffic accident" and "Earth," which makes his reincarnation feel more real. The way he uses his knowledge from Japan to navigate this world adds depth. Like when he compares Cecilia to an idol from his past life—it's a nice touch.
