KathleenHall

I’m intrigued by the foreign races mentioned. The dwarves were brought up as a comparison for sword quality. Will we see other races in the territory? The Northern Border seems diverse with bandits and barbarians. I hope the author builds on that fantasy aspect more.

Honestly, I'm just impressed that a story about a skeleton learning to kill and become stronger can have this much depth in just a few chapters. There's world politics, personal growth, moral conflict, and a cool power system. I'm officially hooked and I'd read the next chapter in a heartbeat.

I like how the translation kept terms like “ge’er” and “taels” without over-explaining. It respects the source material. But a glossary might help readers new to the genre.