HelenBrown
The dynamics between the mother and son are the highlight. She's overprotective and fierce; he's naive but brave. When he stands in front of her to protect her from the principal, it shows that he has inherited her courage. Their relationship feels genuine even when the plot around them is ridiculous. That emotional truth is what will keep me reading.
The lucky stone from little Yang Yi was a great touch. It’s not a plot device yet, but it feels symbolic. Maybe it’s foreshadowing? The smooth green glow and cool feel made me wonder if it’ll tie into the system later.
The fact that the team didn’t even consider leaving after Elki died shows how disposable members are. It makes me wonder about Xia Nan’s own survival chances. That tension—knowing he could easily be the next to die if he makes a wrong move—keeps me on edge.
