The dog scene made me laugh. Lin Yun asking "Is this a dog or a bear?" and Wen Li replying "Dog—Bear—" deadpan is hilarious. And the dog's description – "belly almost touching the ground, round little butt twisting like a small motor" – so cute. The golden bell jingling adds to the image. It breaks the tension perfectly. Also, Wen Li insists on bringing the dog, which shows her loyalty to what's hers. Good character detail.
The writing style overall feels like it was translated from Chinese without much polish. Sentences like “He was beaten up and locked Zeng Xing up for three days” have messed up grammar. It’s readable but distracting. A good editor could smooth out the roughness.
Lin Xueer waking up confused and immediately worrying she bit Jiuyang to death was adorable. You can tell she's a genuinely good person at heart. Her personality aside from the zombie stuff seems sweet, so I'm rooting for her survival.
The eight base professions feel like a typical RPG set, but there’s no mention of hybrid or special classes yet. The fact that job changes after level 10 let you change profession is interesting. It gives flexibility, so Mos’s accidental Warrior pick isn’t a life sentence.
He Wenhui’s role is mostly background, but his speech about reverence for natural principles is the thematic core of the story. He balances science and faith. It’s a decent philosophical point, though delivered a bit preachy.