The author seems to enjoy writing dialogue that shows power dynamics: the fat man licking boots, the principal barking orders, the teacher begging. These are fun to read but become repetitive. Every character speaks in a way that reinforces their place in the hierarchy. I’d like to see conversations where characters disagree or have hidden motives. Right now everyone is exactly who they appear to be: good guy badass, bad guy weakling, and loyal servant.
Latifa's backstory as an adventurer whose partner was killed adds layers to her character. She's not just a damsel in distress; she's a warrior who was caught off guard. Her request for the protagonist to guide her to town shows vulnerability, but also pragmatism. I respect that she's willing to ask for help even after trauma.
Even when running for their lives, there’s comedy. The part where Qin Zhuo hoists Youxiang onto his shoulder like a sack while she’s pouting about dignity – that’s funny. Or when she’s carried and thinks “I’m not a sack!” It lightens the mood. Then immediately after, the grand lightning display and her worrying about being ugly. The humor never undermines the danger, but it keeps it from getting too grim. That balance is key.