EdwardBrown

The system rules are intriguing. “For every yuan earned, the host gets physique and knowledge points up to a 30x multiplier on day thirty.” That’s a smart hook. It makes every small job feel urgent and meaningful.

The action scene with Dino and Revia piloting the Clawsolas was tense! I actually felt worried when the Disaurs knocked them down and Dino got knocked out. The description of sharing senses and the impact feeling real was well done. But the moment Kurato (or Claude?) took over the mecha, it got a little too convenient. Like, automatically knowing how to pilot a giant mecha with just a shared consciousness? A bit of a stretch, but I’ll roll with it for now.