JacobJackson
The family dynamics in this chapter are painfully realistic. Second Uncle is the only decent one, and even he can't stay overnight because his wife is superstitious about death. Fourth Uncle and the others are circling like vultures. It's one thing to have villains, but having relatives who act nice to your face while secretly measuring you for a coffin? That's some gut-punch writing. I wanted Chu Liang to survive just so he could flip the table on all of them.
Pros: adorable protagonist, funny family dynamics, quick progression, emotional moments that hit. Cons: too convenient, lacks realism, some writing clichés like "third master of the family." The author also inserts themselves with that spoiler note which is a bit jarring. But overall, the pros outweigh the cons for a light read. I liked it more than I expected. It doesn’t aim for high literature and that’s okay. It’s a great entry in the "father-daughter fluff" category.
The humor is consistent and natural. From the comparison to a mortuary when she's sleeping to the Ultraman jokes, the comedy doesn't feel forced. It flows from the characters and situations. Even the live stream comments add to the fun, mocking the absurdity of a corpse in the airport.
The whole "Rapid Enlightenment" skill is intriguing. It's not the typical cheat code where you get invincible power immediately. Instead, it boosts your intelligence and comprehension for five hours. That's a clever take on a cheat system—it forces the protagonist to rely on his wits rather than just raw strength. I hope the author sticks with this and doesn't give him an overpowered martial ability too soon.
