The repetition of "Not up to standard" and "Ding! Target found" is a bit grating after a while. The author could have trimmed that part. Still, the eventual discovery of Lin Paopao feels like a relief. Her appearance is not over-described – just "beautiful and moving" and a mention of her chest. That's typical male gaze, but it serves the purpose. I noticed the author said the beauty filter was off, which makes her natural beauty more valuable. That's a good detail. Also, the note that she had only a few hundred viewers feels realistic for a new streamer without a guild. The platform dynamics are believably depicted. I can tell the author has some knowledge of the livestreaming world. These small authentic touches elevate the story above pure fantasy. They make the wish-fulfillment feel slightly grounded.