The writing style is easy to read, with a good balance of dialogue and description. The translation feels natural, not stilted. The internal monologue helps us understand Azami’s thoughts without being over-explained. Some lines are pretty funny, like his worry about the police catching him with a sword in Japan, or his “I’m coming out now” before opening the door. Good humor.
Overall, this is a cozy read with hidden depth. The cat POV works surprisingly well for what's essentially a fix-it fic, and I'm genuinely invested in seeing how Shuo's presence changes the trajectory of everyone involved.
Hao Jingye typing away on the computer while Sheng An just waits is a good partnership. One is the field operative, the other is the analyst. Together they cover all angles. Glad the author didn't make both action heroes.
The pawn shop negotiation with the shopkeeper’s disappointed face when Lin Xiaojiu chose to mortgage the pendant was a subtle moment. Good writing, that. It shows the author pays attention to side character reactions.