The backstory of Lu Ye’s parents disappearing and his uncle Lu Xingyi being a Profound Furnace Sword Master who vanished is a lot of mystery. It feels like the Greedy Wolf Pass battle is just the tip of an iceberg. I want to know what really happened there.
Zheng Tianyou's phone conversation with An Min is both funny and sad. He's so convinced he has everything under control, and she's just feeding him what he wants to hear. His little chest puffing when she says she's ready to be his bride is pathetic. The dramatic irony here—the reader knows she's planning to run while he's dreaming of the inheritance—is delicious. I can't wait for him to realize she's gone.
She walks towards him! Even if it’s a bad choice, it's *her* choice. "I want to leave with Su Qinghuai." That moment of agency is huge. She finally has some control over her own broken body and destiny.
The tension in the first few chapters is all about whether the system works and how much money he can get. Once that's resolved, the tension shifts to what the streamer will do and whether the protagonist will face any consequences. But so far, no real obstacles. The system always works, the bank sends the text messages, the livestream audience is impressed, the girl is grateful. Everything goes perfectly. This is a common problem in power fantasies – no struggle means no suspense. The only moment of mild tension was when he couldn't find a 90+ girl online, but that was resolved quickly. I'm hoping the author introduces some conflict soon: maybe a jealous rival, a scam attempt, or a legal issue. Otherwise, it's just going to be repetitive gift-spamming with no stakes.