1 The Telekinesis skill description being about lifting skirts is so juvenile but it made me snort. It’s the kind of silly joke a friend would make. The note about willpower determining strength is standard but the execution is fun. I want to see Ronnie use this in creative ways not just combat but maybe opening jars or grabbing stuff from high shelves. Being a dragon has its problems.
I gotta say, the decision to go out at night was nerve-wracking to read. The whole sequence where he’s hiding in the bushes, waiting for the moon to go behind clouds, had me holding my breath. The author did a great job building that tension. You can really feel how scared Yu Yuan is, but also how determined. His heartbeat pounding in his ears? Yeah, I felt that.