KatherineGreen

The detail about Lin Mu being called "Fifteen" because the baby was born on the fifteenth of the lunar month - that's such a small but authentic touch. Village nicknames are always rooted in something like that. It makes the world feel lived-in.

One minor criticism: the fight with the thugs was over too quickly. They came in aggressive, and then they were begging just a few lines later. The “Thunderclap Wish-Fulfilling Hand” seems a little too powerful for a starting skill if it can disarm two armed men instantly. I hope there's a cooldown or a weakness later.