The restaurant boss acting like a snob towards the MC then instantly changing his attitude when he sees money is another “face-slapping” moment. It's predictable but still satisfying. I like that the MC doesn't make a huge scene; he just shows the cash and moves on. It keeps the story flowing without dragging out the drama.
The chapter ends on a good hook. "When he woke up again, he found that he was about to Shedding." This is a clear sign of growth and change. It’s a physical milestone for a snake, and it suggests a power boost is coming. It makes you want to click on the next chapter immediately.
The English is generally understandable, but there are some grammatical hiccups like "Heaven forbid! I'm just a bead!" — which is a bit of a mix of formal and informal. Also, "Heaven forbid" feels a bit old-timey for a modern guy. But overall, the narrative flows well. I noticed repeated sentence structures like "This was... that was..." which can get monotonous, but it's not a deal breaker. The thoughts of Lin Yu are consistently in a casual voice, which helps distinguish his perspective from the epic narration.
I’m not usually into amnesia openings, but this one hooks you fast. Waking up in a hospital with no memory is pretty standard, but being hit with a four-million-dollar medical debt in the same scene? That’s a brutal twist I didn’t see coming. It instantly makes you feel the weight of the world.