The chapter leaves you on a perfect cliffhanger. Lu Ziqi is in the dream realm, following the instructions. The scene shifts. What happens next? What emotion will be farmed? It builds the perfect amount of curiosity for the next chapter
Ye Feng’s plan to mess with Zhao Ming’s college recommendation is a good long-term goal. It gives the story direction beyond just revenge. Climbing back into a good university through the National College Entrance Exam feels like a worthwhile challenge.
I was genuinely surprised by how much I enjoyed the scene with the mom, Song Anqin, making chicken soup noodles late at night. It’s such a simple domestic moment, but it speaks volumes about their relationship. The mom scolds her for being up late but still shows care. The details – the white hairs, the rough hands, the way she tucks her daughter’s hair behind her ear – all paint a vivid picture of a family that doesn’t have much money but has a lot of love. That scene alone made me connect with the story.
The introduction of the world federation and the Ghost Gate points system feels a bit convoluted. City, Nation, Continent, World rankings are standard for these game novels, but the addition of the reader ability makes me wonder how it fits into the global leaderboard. Does the system recognize his cheat?
The old vampire is such a relatable character. He's been around for centuries, done all the terrible things, and now he just wants to be left alone in his castle. The way he sighs and gives into the saint's nagging feels exactly like an old granddad humoring an energetic kid. I totally get his "I can't be bothered" energy.