KimberlyAllen
The sack of cash is a great detail. It makes the system feel tangible. No digital credits, just pure physical money. This explains why Cheng Ming hasn’t bought a house yet. The logistics of laundering system cash might actually become a fun subplot later.
One thing I'm confused about is how the mountain functions in modern times. Did it just appear in the middle of nowhere? Are there laws about this? The mist concealment formation was mentioned earlier – does it still work? And with modern technology, a sudden mountain would be all over the news. I'm hoping the author might acknowledge these implications later. But for now I'm enjoying the slice-of-life aspects too much to nitpick.
I appreciate that the story doesn't waste time with a slow setup. Within the first few pages, we've got the Blood Moon, the weirdness, the threat, and the protagonist discovering his powers. It's efficient storytelling that hooks you immediately and doesn't let go.
I’m really curious about Nannan’s condition. Seizures, sleeping for days, talking nonsense about “Bi Yao Bi Yao.” The doctor said he’d never seen that pulse, and even Lin Tian wonders if she’s a transmigrator too. That’s a cool twist if it’s true. It would explain why she was silent for three years—maybe she was adjusting to a new body.
Old Wu’s reaction to Murong Xue’s entrance was intense. The aura crushing her to the ground made me feel a chill. It showed how powerful the Ling Family really is. But Murong Xue’s shock at being disrespected was satisfying. She thought she had complete control over Ling Yan. The part where she cried to manipulate him reminded me of typical drama tropes. It felt realistic in a frustrating way. I wanted to see Ling Yan put her in her place even more severely.
