I'm curious about the clown ghost's backstory. He said he was a manager in life but was made a scapegoat and silenced. That sounds like a whole murder mystery. And he cares about his wife and child, so he's not all bad. I hope we get more depth on him. Also, he hides "private money" which JNY can use—that's a fun resource.
1 The writing style is straightforward and easy to follow, even with all the Chinese fantasy terms. The translation flows well, and there aren't many awkward sentences that pull me out of the story. It’s not literary prose by any means, but it’s functional and immersive enough to keep me reading without getting confused.
2 I’m torn on the “transmigration” aspect so far. It establishes her modern nursing knowledge, but it hasn’t been used in a plot-changing way yet. She burped the baby properly and cleaned him well—useful, but not revolutionary. I hope her medical background comes into play in a bigger way later, maybe saving someone’s life or identifying a poison. Otherwise, the tag feels wasted.
1 The expedition team setup at the start is a good hook. It establishes Ronnie’s skills curiosity and isolation. Him being the only one who can go alone shows he’s competent but also lonely. His death scene is quick and almost anticlimactic which fits the tone. He dies like he lives just accepting it. The transmigration feels earned because he was already an explorer.