DonaldMoore
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The flashback to her getting struck by lightning in her previous life is funny in a dark way. "Encountered bad luck" is such an understatement. It lightens the mood without undermining her trauma.
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The fake treasure map scheme is perfectly designed. He doesn't just leave gold lying around. He creates a whole narrative, complete with a salesman and a map. He understands that people trust a quest more than a handout. The psychology behind the trap is solid.
