FrankDavis

The castle itself feels like a character – the blackout curtains, the dusty corners, the ancient furniture. The descriptions of the familiar emerging from the shadows with a sword bigger than her body show the gothic aesthetic well.

The way Lin Feng talks to everyone—Su Qing, Zhang Long, Li Jun—is very similar. He’s always cold, authoritative, and dismissive. It’s starting to feel robotic. A character should have multiple tones depending on who they’re talking to.