I wish the system would offer side quests or achievements, not just check-ins. The “first kill” reward was a good start, but I want more milestones to look forward to. The story could benefit from reward variety.
The concept of a little girl being guided by a mysterious voice to find her father from a book is fascinating. It’s not fully explained—does she have memories? Why does she know she’s in a book? The voice just tells her the basics and she runs with it. I wish there was more worldbuilding about this system or the book world. But maybe that’s for later. The setting is typical rich family drama—top-tier wealthy family, ruthless patriarch. Nothing we haven’t seen. But the addition of a little girl changes the dynamics nicely.
The section about genetic fusion extending beastkin lifespans was interesting. Three hundred years for ordinary beastkin, longer for stronger ones. No wonder they think in terms of hundred-year plans. The planet lord offering a hundred-year tax exemption makes more sense now.