AngelaCampbell

There’s a saying that the first chapter should hook the reader. This one hooked me. I want to know if Mos will ever get to use that Mage class later, and if she’ll ever meet a human. The potential is there.

Chu Tiankuo is described as devastatingly handsome, but I'm more interested in his personality. So far he's cold, observant, and commanding. Giving a single word order – "Investigate." – shows his authority. But he also watched Xingnong with enough interest to send his attendant after her. I need more interactions to see if he's just a trope or has real depth. The potential is there.