The character of Zhao Weihong is interesting. She’s aggressive and protective of Wen Zhiqing. She’s probably going to be a source of conflict in the village, spreading rumors or causing trouble for Gu Jia Ning. But she’s also being manipulated by Wen Zhiqing. I hope the story shows her eventual disillusionment. It’s always satisfying when a character who was fooled finally sees the truth. Li Juan, the one who mentioned the matchmaker, seems more subtle. She might be playing her own game.
The second excerpt ends with a scene of the protagonist in despair, covering his face and lying on bed, ignoring calls. This moment of defeat after the school humiliation feels genuine. The counselor’s line about losing scholarship is a serious consequence that grounds the comedy. It’s good that the author doesn’t let Xie escape without repercussions. Also, Zhao’s laughter at his misfortune from the scarecrow form adds to the feeling that he has no allies in his misery. But then they have a tender moment when Zhao laments about wanting a body, and Xie says he’s saving money. It hints that beneath the banter, Xie is not just a reckless party boy. The ability to show vulnerability and loyalty in brief beats makes me care about their quest. The scene ends with mention of rain and warm yellow light from dusk to dawn, which is a nice atmospheric close that signals a new phase.
Yan Huoshui the red fox is giving major dangerous flirt energy. His voice is described as “mellow fine wine” that makes Shi Lan’s ears feel pregnant, and he deliberately draws out her name with a chuckle. But underneath that charm, he’s clearly bitter and irritable — he throws his utensils when frustrated. I get the feeling he’s using flirtation as a mask for despair. That kind of layered writing for side characters is always a win.
Feixue stuffing herbs into Mo Han’s hand at the border and saying she can’t make potions is a nice character moment. It shows her practical side and her limitation as an elf. Similarly, Bing Ling’s three ice crystals feel like a protective parent’s promise. These gifts are meaningful and will probably reappear later as plot devices. Good setup. I also like that Feixue admits her inability with alchemy – it makes her more grounded rather than an all-powerful elf.
The sixth princess is old before her time the way she manipulates the situation with Consort Li - saying Consort Li called her a bastard in front of everyone - that's some strategic thinking for a three-year-old.