Mos’s decision to “become human again” is a solid main goal. The immediate need to survive in the sewer gives her a series of short-term goals. This structure should keep the plot moving. I just wonder how she’ll level up as a rat with such a short lifespan.
I love how the story kicks off with the market sounds—it immediately dropped me into the chaos. The way Zhao Xingyue is shouting about warm pork feels so real, you can almost smell the blood and hear the flies buzzing around. Granny Su calling her "Sixth" and her annoyance with it is such a small but relatable detail; it's like having that one neighbor who never gets your name right.
I just finished reading the raws, and I must say, this story truly comes together beautifully by the end. While it does have a slightly open-ended conclusion, it is undeniably influenced by "Top Tier Providence." That said, the author does a remarkable job of fleshing out the characters; each one is imbued with a distinct personality that makes them relatable and engaging, allowing you to genuinely develop affection for them. The narrative does follow many common tropes prevalent in the xuanhuan genre, but what sets it apart is the way it executes them. The storytelling is not only clever but also fresh, ensuring that even familiar plot elements feel invigorated and exciting. I highly recommend this read for anyone who enjoys this sub-genre of xuanhuan. It's a captivating journey that balances depth and entertainment, leaving readers both satisfied and eager for more. Whether you're a seasoned fan or new to the genre, this story will undoubtedly resonate with you, making it a worthwhile addition to your reading list.
The Dream Entry ability is clever. Having to physically get close to the sleeping girl because his cultivation is too weak? That's a nice limitation. And the way he leads her in the dream—stealing her hoe to get her to follow—was playful. He couldn't speak, so he had to use actions. That's good problem-solving. And the dream slowly fading when she wakes up? Pretty cinematic. I'm invested in whether she actually finds the herb now. Please don't let the weasel get her first.
The daughter, Lu Miaomiao, is the cutest thing ever. The way she runs in with the half-eaten rose crisp and sugar crumbs on her sleeve, asking if the gift is edible. That’s peak little kid behavior. The secret she’s trying to tell is so heartbreakingly innocent. She doesn’t even understand the full weight of “divorce;” she just knows it’s bad and makes her sad. Her crying about not wanting to choose between Mommy and Second Brother was a punch right in the gut. It instantly made the wife’s actions feel so much more serious and real.
I'm not sure why the driver targeted Li Wei specifically. The line about messing up the personnel list suggests it could have been someone else, but then he says “the result is the same.” So maybe Li Wei was always meant for this world? This mystery keeps me wanting to know more.