30. Overall initial impression: this is a solid 5/10 start with potential to be really good. The concept is fresh, the protagonist is likable, the stakes are clear. Weaknesses are some pacing issues and underdeveloped worldbuilding rules. But the emotional beats hit well and I'm definitely continuing. That cliffhanger with Jiang Qi'an asking about getting more clothes and Chen Jinyue calculating the warehouse stock? I need to know what happens with the 140,000 pieces.
2 The cliffhanger at the end where Shen Shuangyu realizes the comments are real and starts asking questions is highly addicting. I immediately wanted to know what happens next. The pacing is very webnovel-friendly; each chapter leaves you craving more.
I like that the brothers built their houses together and the grandmother lives with the elder son. Even the cheap, crumpled cigarette pack Lin Pingshan pulls out feels right for a poor fisherman. These small details build a believable community.
I liked the “Weak Point Strike” mechanic. It shows that the game isn't just about raw stats. There is a skill component here. Chen Feng isn't just strong because of his Agility; he’s strong because he knows where to hit. This separation of “player skill” and “character stats” is a subtle but important point. It rewards smart players and keeps the combat interesting.