The chapter ends on a cliffhanger of sorts – Wang Li is home, but we don't see his parents' reactions to his dinner plans. We also don't see him actually start cultivating. The subsequent content is cut off. So the next part likely continues with family dinner or preparation for tomorrow's martial arts class. I'm hoping for a scene where Wang Li reflects on his memories and finds some hidden skill or knowledge that gives him hope. That would be a satisfying progression.
Overall, this is a fun, brainless read. It checks all the boxes for a modern martial arts romance: overpowered MC, arrogant beauty, misunderstandings, and quick action. The writing isn't high art, but it's entertaining. I'd continue reading if I want something light to pass the time. The cliffhanger about the master's purpose keeps me curious.
I like that the pilgrimage group is already on the move. The time constraint creates urgency. Bai Ze only has days to prepare, which forces him to make risky choices. That keeps the plot driving forward without lulls.
The combat scene was intense. When Chen Feng messed up because his new “tank” body couldn’t keep up with his old “pro” reflexes, I felt that frustration. It’s such a realistic way to show a starting-from-zero character. He has the knowledge, but his stats are limiting him. It immediately sets a high difficulty level. The game isn't going to let him coast on talent; he has to work for it. That’s a good sign for a long-term story.
30. For a start, this book does a great job of planting mysteries and setting up conflicts. The amnesia faking, the mother's absence, the father's coldness, the hidden power level. It's a slow burn with a lot of potential. I'm definitely going to keep reading to see if she takes down this whole messed up family.