Is no one going to talk about the smell? Filling a warehouse and his villa with fifty thousand tons of raw meat is going to create an insane scent trail. I am genuinely worried his base is going to become a beacon for every stronger zombie and mutated animal in the region.
20. I'm a bit worried about the romance potential here. Chen Jinyue and Jiang Qi'an barely know each other but they keep exchanging meaningful glances and he keeps noticing her appearance. I hope it doesn't become a rushed love story. Let them build a solid business relationship first, then maybe feelings later. The stakes are too high for romance right now.
Overall, this is exactly the kind of wuxia system story I enjoy. It takes a familiar setting (Qin unification, schools of thought) and injects a supernatural ranking system that shakes everything up. The execution is solid—good character moments, clear power scaling, and real stakes. The only risk is if the rewards become too predictable, but for now, I’m hooked and ready for the next rank reveal.
I’m amazed by how much content is packed into such a short text. The first chapter alone has multiple battles, a character arc for Youki, a confession, and world setup without feeling cluttered. It's tight writing. The only downside is that some parts feel skimmed over, like the month of fights.