The combat space with magical barriers that prevent outside interference is a smart mechanic. It allows for no-holds-barred fights without collateral damage. I can see that being used for big showdowns later.
2 Her medical background feels wasted so far. She’s a top-tier doctor but hasn’t done anything doctorly except take a pill. I hope in the 60s she actually heals people and shows off her skills.
The comparison between Xiao Nai and Fan Li is brilliant. Both are outwardly noble men who fall for a pawn. Fan Li betrayed Xi Shi, and now Xiao Nai is repeating the pattern. Bei Shi sees it immediately and uses that knowledge. That layer of historical irony makes the story more than just a simple revenge plot—it’s a commentary on how power and desire corrupt even the “righteous” men.
One thing that bugs me is how easily Maji and Gagu decide to raid the goblin lair. I get that they’re greedy, but after just losing a teammate, wouldn’t you be more cautious? Maybe that’s the point—they’re “trash fish” for a reason. Still, it made me anxious reading it, which is good storytelling.
Okay, the children. Xiang Yuanxiao is a whole mood – that little kid trying to act tough and protect his siblings even though he’s terrified. When he spread his arms and said “take my younger brother and sister and go first, I’ll hold them off,” I actually laughed out loud. Such a dramatic four-year-old. But the way he hides his tears and checks the steamed buns for poison before letting his siblings eat broke my heart. They’ve clearly been neglected and abused by the original owner, so their distrust is earned. I like that Xiang Ying doesn’t try to force affection; she just gives them food and space. The pinch to his cheek was funny too. I genuinely want to see her earn their love. The silent second son and the scared little girl have so much potential for growth.