I hope they explore the downsides of being a unique sequence. Is it harder to find cultivation resources? Are there special side effects? Is the "All Evils Avoided" passive a blessing or a curse if he meets non-evil monsters? The story sets up a world of pure evil zombies, but what about other people or spirits? A unique path often means a lonely path. I hope the author adds some costs to this power, some trials that specifically exploit his "unique" nature. Conflict is the soul of drama, and a perfect power is boring without a price.
The atmosphere of the present timeline is beautiful. The heavy snow, the white flags, the cold wind. It feels like the whole capital is crying for the General. The stark winter landscape perfectly hides the burning inferno of revenge under the surface.
I'm a bit annoyed by how everyone treats Jiang Que like garbage without question. The senior brothers, the disciples—they all just accept that she's evil because the original novel says so. It's realistic for bullies, but I hope the story gives her a chance to prove them wrong.
Xiao Qing’s maid servant Buyu seems loyal. She’s the one who suggests pastries and follows orders. I hope she becomes a supporting character. The other servants complaining about turning back annoyed me – they have no idea Huihui just saved them from a landslide.
I like that Vig isn’t just a blank slate. He has a past as a time traveler, but he adapts quickly. His survival instincts are strong even if he’s not a fighter yet.
The Storm Wolf King is cool, but he is very flat so far. He is the strong, silent, loyal type that just says "Yes, my Lord" and wants to fight. I need a bit more personality from him. Maybe some rivalry with Sals, or a unique way of hunting. He needs a character hook beyond his level.