I wonder if Gu Jia Ning's knowledge of the future will lead her to try to save her second brother and his wife. In the past life, he went to jail and she died in childbirth. That's a major tragedy. Sheng Ze Xi seems powerful enough to help. Maybe her relationship with him will allow her to change those outcomes. I hope so. These side characters are too precious to lose. The story seems to be setting that up as a possible future goal.
I have to say, the moment when the God says “you’ll die~” with a tilde is so casual it’s almost comedic. That kind of ruined the tension for me. I know it’s meant to be teasing, but after the heavy hospital sequences, it feels like the story doesn’t take itself seriously anymore. Maybe the author intends a lighthearted tone going forward. That’s okay, but it might disappoint readers who expected a darker drama. The mix of emotions is tricky. The taxi driver kindness was poignant; the God being playful is jarring. I think the author should pick a tone and stick with it. Or at least transition more smoothly. The first part felt like a contemporary drama, the second part like a comic fantasy. It’s a whiplash. But for a web novel, that’s not uncommon. Readers might get used to it.
I really enjoy Sheng An's character. She's no-nonsense, sarcastic, physically strong, and she doesn't waste time. When she points that gun and says she can shoot uncooperative subjects, I believed her.
Lute's inner monologue is very self-aware. He knows he is a coward in his past life, and he is actively trying to overcorrect by being reckless. It's a very understandable character flaw.
I need to talk about the burly man on the plane with the calluses. That description was so specific. The fact that she couldn't tell if he was military, mercenary, or just a guy with a rough job adds this layer of uncertainty. In the apocalypse, everyone's a potential threat or ally.