The writing style has occasional awkwardness, especially when describing internal conflict. For example, "I made a certain resolution" feels like a placeholder line. But these moments are rare and don't ruin the flow. The charm of Youki’s voice carries over these rough edges, making it an enjoyable read overall.
The pacing in these first few chapters is fast, but not in a bad way. We get the transmigration, the fall, the recovery, and the confrontation with the parents all in a short space. It feels like the story is speeding through the setup to get to the good stuff with the family dynamics.
I like how the story weaves in some internet reaction bits, like people speculating why zombies don’t attack a pink car. It’s a small touch but makes the world feel alive — like regular people are still out there gossiping even in the apocalypse. The “zombies don’t eat brainless female drivers” joke was dumb but also exactly the kind of thing you’d see online.