The final scene of Mos sleeping in the dark corner with the sound of water dripping is a solid ending beat. It gives a pause for both her and the reader. The fight left her exhausted, and the dripping water is both calming and lonely. Good atmospheric writing to close the chapter.
The pacing in the Grandpa Fang scene is tense. You can see Shen Qi trying to end things peacefully while Grandpa Fang keeps misunderstanding and blaming Fang Yi. She doesn't want to hurt him, but she also won't back down. The author balances her needs well. When she says "Fang Yi and I are truly not compatible," it's firm but not cruel. And then she decides to just let Grandpa Fang see the injury later, which is a smart narrative choice. It shows she's strategic about how she handles situations. She's learned from her past life mistakes of being too emotional. That growth is subtle but present.
I found myself getting genuinely angry at the injustice. The fabric being so old-fashioned that even an old woman would find it too subdued is a cruel detail. It's a small petty act, but it shows deep disrespect.