| Date | Group | Release |
|---|---|---|
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c131 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c130 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c129 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c128 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c127 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c126 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c125 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c124 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c123 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c122 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c121 |
| 2026-05-29 | lightnovelasia | c120 |
Overall, this first part reads like a solid setup for a courtyard revenge story. The translation quality is okay—some awkward phrasings like “whew—let out a long breath” and “host dad” but nothing unreadable. I’m invested in seeing the house reclaimed and the villains humiliated. If the author keeps the pacing tight and doesn’t drown us in system menus, this could be a fun ride. I’ll probably keep reading.
I really like that the MC doesn’t pretend to be a saint. He says things like “I want to play with these animals” and admits he’s not here to be a good person. That kind of honest anti-hero mentality fits the setting where everyone else is scum. It makes him relatable even if his methods are ruthless. I’m all for protagonist gray morality when it’s earned.
The pacing feels like a Prologue+Chapter 1 combo. The bus ride and system talk were a bit slow, but once the MC saw his parents everything ramped up. The author managed to cram a lot of backstory and setup in the first few thousand words without losing momentum. I appreciate efficient storytelling. I already know the setting, the conflict, and the MC’s motivation. Good.
The idea of using the “emotion collection system” for points could lead to interesting interactions. The MC might need to create drama to harvest anger or fear. That would make him proactively stir up trouble, which could be a fun meta layer. But right now the system seems vague. I need more clarity on how it actually works beyond buying things. The farm and space are already huge boons.
I’m a bit worried the MC is too OP. He has military skills, a system with instant benefits, and now the entire police and factory behind him. The villains are shown as weak and scared. That could work for a few chapters, but I hope the author gives them some cunning moves later. Otherwise, the conflict will be one-sided and boring. The deaf old lady fainting was already a cheap trick.
The scene where the mother offers the last two steamed buns to the MC was a knife twist. She thinks he’s hungry, but he pulls out meat buns from his backpack. That contrast between their poverty and his ability to provide is stark. It also showcases the mom’s love. She didn’t care about her own hunger. That level of detail is what makes characters feel real.