NicholasTaylor
Killing the giant python in one fireball for 1260 damage was a oops moment because the pyhon has 1200 health. Instant kill again. The exp for a level 8 monster is 120, and Tang Feng immediately levels from 4 to The all-server announcement for opening the trading system happens right after. So the pacing is quick – he leaves village, fights, gets quest, fights more, gets another level. No 30-chapter grind. Some might say it’s too fast, but I actually like the quick progression in early game stories. It keeps up the momentum.
I must admit that having only read the first 11 chapters, I understand why some may hesitate to take my opinion seriously. A review based on such limited material may not seem substantial. However, I am compelled to express my thoughts, particularly regarding the character of Prince Alan. From the very onset, Alan has struck me as overwhelmingly unlikable, and my frustration with him has only grown as I've continued reading. His arrogance and sense of entitlement are palpable, overshadowing any potential depth or complexity that could redeem him in the eyes of the reader. I find myself hoping for a different portrayal of a prince, one that embodies the virtues of leadership, wisdom, or even genuine charisma. Instead, Alan comes across as a typical antagonist—self-serving and lacking in the qualities that might inspire loyalty or admiration from those around him. It’s disappointing, as I had anticipated a character arc that would allow him to develop and evolve, becoming more than just the archetypal "bad prince." Despite my reservations about Alan, I remain somewhat hopeful about the overall direction of the story. The writing has potential, and the world-building hints at deeper plots and intricate relationships that could play a significant role as the narrative unfolds. I look forward to seeing how the author develops the other characters and the overarching storylines in subsequent chapters. Perhaps, there’s a chance for Alan to redeem himself, or perhaps a greater conflict will arise that will shift the focus away from his character entirely. Either way, this journey has definitely piqued my interest, and I’m eager to see where it leads.
The author's sense of modernity is great. The description of the wedding of the century and the live broadcast feels very media-savvy. It feels like a real event you would see trending on social media. It grounds the fantasy world in a recognizable digital environment, which helps sell the transition into the primitive survival of the apocalypse.
The second simulation starting earlier, with two more corpses in the corridor, made the danger feel real. People try to explore, but they die immediately. It's a harsh reminder that without the game system, they're doomed. Su Hong's "correct decision to resign" line felt like dark humor amidst the horror.
The moment where Huihui comforts Xiao Qing after she cries – patting her shoulder and saying “Don’t cry” – is so tender. A total stranger child gives more comfort than her own family. That irony makes the scene really emotional. Xiao Qing hugging her tightly feels earned.
