The contribution point system is a nice micro‑economy. One point per month, and you need them for techniques. That means climbing the ladder takes years for odd‑job disciples. It reinforces how hard it is to rise from the bottom. The fact that Li Qian saves his monthly ten taels instead of sending them home (because he’s an orphan transmigrator) is a small but telling detail – he has no familial ties, so his only goal is personal advancement. That makes his motivation clean and simple.
1 The schoolgirl uniform was a step down from the bunny girl, but her slapping that woman in the dressing room was awesome. She's not a passive victim. She has a breaking point, and she will fight back, even if it's just a slap.
The dialogue during the mountain climb feels natural. Du Shao’s kindness, Li Dong’s fake sweetness, and Lin Du’s calculated responses all fit their personalities perfectly. I especially liked how Lin Du says things with a straight face but clearly has ulterior motives. The tea aroma comment from the system was spot on. It’s that kind of layered interaction that makes me want to read more.
Su Yang lying about being his tamer was such a survival instinct moment. I would’ve done the same. But the way she stumbles over names—first says ‘Su’ then corrects to ‘Shu Fu’—is so painfully awkward. And he just accepts it? Buys it completely? That either makes him naive or incredibly lonely. The idea that an SSS-rank criminal might have a soft spot for his ‘tamer’ is both sweet and terrifying because if he finds out she’s lying… yikes.
1 The idea of an adopted daughter, Jasmine, being brought in because of the eldest daughter's death is such a classic trope, but it works here. I can already feel the tension brewing. Is Jasmine going to be threatened by the real daughter coming back? Or is she going to be an ally? I'm leaning towards the former.
The relationship between Liang De and Lin Baolong seems promising. Lin Baolong is willing to help a stranger because “helping each other is how you survive.” He’s not naive—he knows killing might be necessary—but he’s holding onto humanity. Liang De, on the other hand, is emotionally exhausted. The dynamic of a weary pessimist and a practical optimist could lead to some good growth. I hope Lin Baolong becomes a mentor figure, even if temporary.
The bit about her not needing to eat or drink, and losing taste – that’s a grim reality of being a zombie. But the story doesn’t dwell on it darkly. Instead, she pouts and throws the corn. And when she thinks about biting Qin Zhuo just to try it – that’s dark humor. She’s genuinely curious, not malicious. And his reaction, “Don’t tell me you want to eat me?” – perfect comedic timing. The internal thought about him competing for prettiest zombie is gold.