The pacing after the split slows down slightly: sleep, move, dream. But then the crow mystery picks up again.
The phrase "the spring light was pleasant" contrasts sharply with the snowy, cold opening. It gives a sense of renewal, fitting the rebirth theme. I also like the descriptions of the clothing: pomegranate skirt, yellow embroidered shoes. Small details that paint a vivid picture. The author is good at using sensory details to set the scene without overwhelming the reader.
The small worldbuilding details add realism, like the shelter having capacity units, the weather log in the logbook, and the temperature reading. The fact that daytime and nighttime have specific durations in the misty world makes it feel like a real place with rules. The consistency of rules like nighttime dangerous and daytime safe for exploration establishes credibility. These details show careful planning by the author.
And then Li Moxie yelling "buy me instead" was so cringey and desperate. She's trying so hard to be what he wants, but she's just a cheap copy. His reaction, just telling her to get out, shows he doesn't actually care about her.
The sexism is rampant: female value tied to virginity, betrothal gifts, being a “burden.” The grandmother calls Xiao Yu “bitch” and “jinx.” It’s infuriating but authentic for the setting. The author doesn’t sugarcoat it.
The setting of Meng Academy is weird and fun. It has telephone booths that teleport you, a principal that doesn't manage things, a nurse that scams students, teachers that may or may not be ancient enemy stones. It feels like a school from a goofy anime. The way the students gossip about the new Earthlings and show mild discrimination is a real societal detail that gives the world depth without being preachy. It's not a "humans are persecuted" story, it's a "this school is a cliquey mess" story, which is more realistic and funny. I dig the chaotic, low-stakes adventure vibe of the school.